Wednesday, 18 March 2015

Writing to Describe

We are learning to write to describe. For fun today we arranged for one of the teachers to dress up and kidnap a child from the class. ( the children knew that this was going to happen so no one was frightened).
We pretended to ring the police, who asked for a description to help them with their search!
We had to be clear and include all the details that we could remember.

WANTED:

The Kidnapper had black hair, a green handbag, a black flowered dress, red sunglasses and mesh covered her face. She had a blue bow on the top of her head and behind it she had a tiny little hat. Emerald had been kidnapped.
By Eli

(fortunately by morning tea Emerald had been found thanks to Eli's clear description and normality had been restored to the class- phew!)


1 comment:

  1. We were interested to read about your kidnapping problem. We loved the picture and thought Eli's description was very clear. We hope the kidnapper does not visit us!

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